Oh man, that's a wicked start. (It really puts me in the mood to write more Tekken of my own.) Their interaction at the beginning, with Hwoarang's drive to fight Jin, but that falling to the side when he sees just how fucked Jin is at the moment.

Yes, you've gotta finish that (no pressure, of course! ^_~) but it definitely has a great start. (It'd be interesting to read the scene from Jin's pov, just because him answering the door looking like crap makes me wonder what he's been up to.)

I like the image of Hwoarang tracking Jin down. The moment he and Baek move to Japan he runs off "Jiiii~iiiin! I want my fiiii~ight! ♥"

Drop me a note if you continue, eh? I'd like to see this.