You are a shitbag. Helping people with their bad fanfiction by offering to beta their stories is great, and is something a lot of those "14-year-old YOAI fans" really need, but editing their fics completely just to feed your huge superiority complex makes me want to shoot you in the face. None of us were any good when we started writing as teenagers, and you may have stomped all over some poor girl's heart instead of doing the right thing.

P.S. Nice typo. Is "yoai" like yaoi? Great editing skills you've got there.