[ SECRET POST #2676 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2676 ⌋

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Comments

[gondremark]

The acting is pretty good and production quality is definitely a bit lavish. But the quality of the writing definitely lacks something. The story fits together, but it's a little slipshod and clumsy and it's definitely got some rough edges. The dialogue is pretty blah-blah-blah-THING sometimes, too, and doesn't really do much by way of characterisation.
And the profusion of squicky sex scenes: if you have to rely on that much porn to keep your audience interested, you've failed miserably as a storyteller.

Me, I like the show despite all its obvious shortcomings, and I couldn't quite call it crappy (the non-crappy outbalances the crappy). But it is riddled with shortcomings, and if the acting doesn't outweight the bad writing for you, then yes, you could call it crappy.