[ SECRET POST #2692 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2692 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 070 secrets from Secret Submission Post #385.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[insanenoodlyguy]

I've said this before, but I think this is one of those cases where the author had "ideas" and lots of ideas about each character, but not the glue that holds it together: A well plotted storyline. It feels like Yamino is just throwing situations at them rather then plotting it out.

[leikomgwtfbbq]

That was why I couldn't keep reading. The first handful of pages were fun and kind of intriguing but then it just kind of stalled out and spun its wheels and as far as I know it's still spinning them.