[ SECRET POST #2734 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2734 ⌋

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Re: +1.

[(Anonymous)]

I think a lot of what's wrong with Harry's storyline could have been fixed with a few extra lines and scenes in the first one to establish him as Peter's friend.

A quick line from Ben or May worrying about Peter without Harry around to help with bullies, and Peter replying he's been handling himself fine the past two years. A shot of or a scene of Peter reading a magazine and a quick, bitter line from him about how well Harry's doing despite not calling. After cutting off the message Ben left him, Peter trying to call Harry and having him not pick up. Then Peter moves on to Gwen as an emotional anchor.

It wouldn't have added too much time to the movie, would have established their friendship and history a bit, and laid the groundwork for the awkward reunion and rekindling of their friendship in the second one. It would also have laid groundwork for Peter to hesitate and be a little distrustful of him as he's already proven to be flighty, and therefore not easily trusted with the Spiderman powers, so his refusal to even give a blood sample to test for a cure would be more understandable.