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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2014-07-17 06:31 pm

[ SECRET POST #2753 ]


⌈ Secret Post #2753 ⌋

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mekkio: (Default)

Re: Favorite lines from your own writing?

[personal profile] mekkio 2014-07-18 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
From an original ongoing vampire novel-

Lenny clucked his tongue in disappointment. “Then he is going to be the death of you.”

He rose from the bed and retrieved his jacket. Mako closed his eyes as he heard the man make his way toward the door.

“And what will you do if he does do that?”

“Well, then I am going to learn how an upyr works on the inside.”

Mako swallowed. It went down his throat like a rock. “Do you mean by dissecting me or Max?”

Lenny shrugged. “Both.”

I liked this bit because it sums up Mako and Lenny's relationship. Lenny is a psychopath (though be it very human. Mako is the vampire here.) and he has no emotional attachment to Mako only a strong curiosity. He calls Mako "pet" and everyone thinks that a term of endearment but in truth, that Mako's title. He doesn't even care for Mako enough to call him regularly by his name.
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Re: Favorite lines from your own writing?

[personal profile] fingalsanteater 2014-07-18 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
This sounds really interesting! I love this excerpt and the dichotomy of the characters.
mekkio: (Default)

Re: Favorite lines from your own writing?

[personal profile] mekkio 2014-07-18 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I just hope one day I'll get off my lazy butt and finish it.