[ SECRET POST #2753 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2753 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

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Comments

Re: Favorite lines from your own writing?

[fingalsanteater]

Aw, I'm self-conscious about some of my writing, but not all of it. The more personal it it, the more self-conscious I am about it. I hate people I know irl reading it, for the most part,

1.) I love repetition and do use it on occasion. It can be very effective, as I think it was in the piece you posted,

2.) Ah, quiet introspection. I love it (but I think I'm pretty crap at writing it). This is a good scene. I definitely feel her loneliness too.

3.) I love this too!

4.) Ooo. Lovely imagery. I love... uh, touch imagery? Descriptions of touch (like calloused hands).

Re: Favorite lines from your own writing?

[kallanda_lee]

Aw, thank you!