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fandomsecrets2014-08-23 03:32 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2014-08-23 03:32 pm
[ SECRET POST #2790 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2790 ⌋
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Re: THANK YOU OP
Glad to hear it works!
And, of course, real people can have tragic backstories too.
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It's easy to get carried away with "OH THIS IS SO COOL" and forget about story when you're a young writer, and sometimes when you're older.
It can help to appeal to someone's decent side and talk to them like a friend who's on their side. Be honest but in a way that's tactful and kind. Talk with them as if you KNOW they can do really well if just given the chance.
I agree. One of my character's emotionally abusive grandparents were inspired by the experiences of friends of mine. I wanted to call to attention the kind of subtler emotional abuse that doesn't get enough attention or recognition. How it can hurt just as much and be just as powerful and equally difficult since there's not as much outward signs. His broken self image as a result of their abuse becomes a big issue as the story goes on. One of his challenges is to learn to like himself. The biggest and most worrying part of it is that he doesn't dwell or brood on it, he really just sort of accepts it as normal and doesn't think there's anything wrong with him hating himself.
(at one point in the story when he almost loses a sibling , he almost shuts down and gives up, deciding he has no purpose other than to be around for someone else's sake.)
I wrote it so that it's not stated "[name] is depressed and hates himself", but it can be seen in his actions and what he thinks and does.
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Clever! And showing, not telling, which is often good. Though in story creation, sometimes the strongest scenes can come from not strictly following rules (e.g. a scene based around a character realising that they are depressed).
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I want to avoid brooding, I made him self aware in some respects about himself (sometimes bordering on being overcritical) and basically just writing him like "what would a person with these issues DO? how would they react?"
Showing through actions can be more powerful than words, IMO. I just want to write a character with self hate issues that's genuine, and not a typical brooder.
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