[ SECRET POST #2809 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2809 ⌋

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Comments

[ketita]

tbh, I think you're overthinking it. If nobody even complained, then what's your basis for thinking that your writing is pretentious? If you're writing the way that feels right to you, then great, keep going. If you're really worried, get a beta or two who has a style different from yours and see what they say, or look for concrit. That's if you really think it's worthwhile trying to change and see what happens.

I mean the thesaurus thing is when you read something and it looks like somebody had a party with a thesaurus because the fancy words aren't actually contributing anything to the text. They're fancy to be fancy.