[ SECRET POST #2812 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2812 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Annoying things that writers do

[(Anonymous)]

Yeah, so with you on the physical descriptors, especially in fanfic since we freaking know what they look like already.

And it just feels so lazy to romance. I really hate when I read a fic and I can't buy the pairing because the writer portrayed it like they're in lust and the love is just tacked on.. "oh you're so hot!! i want to kiss and fuck you... this is love" blabhlabhlah.

Also another thing is.. it's specific.

C1: I'm such an idiot.
C2: But you're my idiot!!

(same with anything.. "he's 'my werewolf', he's 'my jerk', he's 'my delinquent")

C1: Uhg, why are you so irritating! Why did you have to do that?
C2: But you love me anyway!

NO JUST STOP IT.

Re: Annoying things that writers do

[scrubber]

God you really hit the nail on the head. Some dialogue is just so... bad.

On the other hand, you can see a line like that and just x out of the fic and that's nice.