[ SECRET POST #2860 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #2860 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 062 secrets from Secret Submission Post #409.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

That my writing's unclear and too verbose.
That I have to be in some sort of sudden headzone to write with emotion and read it over and still feel it the next day.
That the little, major things for me, like dialogue where one character's words shift from 'us' to 'you' mean nothing to the reader.
That my antagonist will be seen as excused/right because their actions ultimately helped and a few major characters were sympathetic to their tragic soul.
Any of the technical parts. I can think up a beginning, an ending, but plot points, themes, arcs, the message, symbols? My brain tends to lock down.