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fandomsecrets2015-03-17 06:44 pm
[ SECRET POST #2995 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2995 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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[Twin Peaks]
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[Big Hero 6]
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[WWE/NXT]
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[Chris Barrie (Red Dwarf)]
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[Person of Interest]
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[Legend of Korra]
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[Final Fantasy X]
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[Xenoblade Chronicles]
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[Jeremy Clarkson from Top Gear]
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[Paul Darrow]
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[Gore Vidal]
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[South Park]
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[Ursula K. LeGuin, Earthsea series]
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[Galavant]
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[A Goofy Movie]
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[Mockingjay]
Notes:
Secrets Left to Post: 04 pages, 079 secrets from Secret Submission Post #428.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Re: A brief public service announcement on grammar
(Anonymous) 2015-03-18 02:34 am (UTC)(link)I still have difficulties sometimes with things that sound as though they should be speech tags (laughed, sighed etc.).
A writing teacher once said that if you can't actually speak words while you're doing those things, then they're not speech tags therefore they need a period not a comma. Cue me sitting there sometimes trying to see if I can actually laugh the sentence I'm writing.
Re: A brief public service announcement on grammar
"This is an example sentence," she laughed.
is a valid statement if she says "This is an example sentence" with a laugh in her voice.
"This is an example sentence." She laughed.
is a pair of valid statements if she says "This is an example sentence" and laughs afterwards.
Thus, if she doesn't laugh afterwards, the latter formulation is incorrect.
Does that make any sense?
Re: A brief public service announcement on grammar
(Anonymous) 2015-03-18 03:04 am (UTC)(link)You can say, shout, scream, whisper words, but you can't laugh, smile, smirk, etc. them.
So the correct versions would be your second version, or:
"This is an example sentence," she said, laughing.
Re: A brief public service announcement on grammar
"This is an example sentence," she laughed.
meant she did that thing where you say something while sort of hiccuping because a laugh is catching in your throat.
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