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fandomsecrets2015-03-17 06:44 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2015-03-17 06:44 pm
[ SECRET POST #2995 ]
⌈ Secret Post #2995 ⌋
Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.
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[Twin Peaks]
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[Big Hero 6]
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[WWE/NXT]
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[Chris Barrie (Red Dwarf)]
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11.
[Person of Interest]
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[Legend of Korra]
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[Final Fantasy X]
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14.
[Xenoblade Chronicles]
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15.
[Jeremy Clarkson from Top Gear]
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[Paul Darrow]
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[Gore Vidal]
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[South Park]
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[Ursula K. LeGuin, Earthsea series]
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[Galavant]
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[A Goofy Movie]
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[Mockingjay]
Notes:
Secrets Left to Post: 04 pages, 079 secrets from Secret Submission Post #428.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.
Re: DA
(Anonymous) 2015-03-18 03:50 am (UTC)(link)The core sentences in that line would be:
"Okay, so this is the stallion."
and
"And these are the mares who like the stallion."
The interruptions to those lines of dialogue belong as parts of each of those sentences, however you want to structure it (commas or dashes, not ellipses) and whatever kind of pause effect you're going for, so the periods at the end of the interruptions are incorrect.