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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-04-23 06:40 pm

[ SECRET POST #3032 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3032 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Ioan Gruffudd/Horatio Hornblower]


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03.
[ebooks tree]


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04.
[Horrible Histories]


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05.
[Burn Notice]


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06.
[Bradley Cooper]


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08.
[Grimm]


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09.
[Assassin's Creed: UNITY]


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10. [POSSIBLE WARNING for suicide]


[David Walliams]


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11.
[Game of Thrones]


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12.
[Nina Dobrev]


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13.
[The Avengers]


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15.
[Fire Emblem: Awakening]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 019 secrets from Secret Submission Post #433.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

(Anonymous) 2015-04-24 08:54 pm (UTC)(link)
"The lighting in the picture you chose is very beautiful, OP, like the slow drift of the sun into fragments of meaning like the slow drift of the sun into fragments of meaning"

A simile is a comparison between two different things. This sentence compares light to a source of light, then tosses in a phrase that makes no sense in the context.

"The slice of pizza on this plate is like the steamy bubbling of food into shards of regret"

Also not a simile. But they're both examples of poor writing, albeit poor writing that might pass muster with the less discriminating.