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⌈ Secret Post #3042 ⌋

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I told him that I couldn't give proper critique because there wasn't anything bad about the story. It was mostly just flat--none of the usual newbie writer mistakes, no real plot hook, serviceable characters with no depth or complexity, minimal stylistic flourishes . . . The most I could advise him was to figure out what he wanted to use to draw readers in and make them care, then build on that.

Edited 2015-05-03 22:12 (UTC)

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