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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-05-03 03:41 pm

[ SECRET POST #3042 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3042 ⌋

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 071 secrets from Secret Submission Post #435.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Re: So you offer to read someone's story...

(Anonymous) 2015-05-03 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Hell, I wish someone would go through my stories paragraph by pargraph (fanfic and original). I'm at the point where the feedback I need pertains to really nuanced concepts (e.g. scene transitions, pacing, balance of sentence types to keep readers engaged, etc.).

Re: So you offer to read someone's story...

(Anonymous) 2015-05-03 11:46 pm (UTC)(link)
For your original stories this might be something for you:
https://www.scribophile.com/

It's basically a site for writers to give and receive constructive feedback.