[ SECRET POST #3055 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3055 ⌋

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Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 2 3 - posted twice ].
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Comments

Re: Question for the serious Fanficcers

[(Anonymous)]

One piece of general-purpose advice to add to the good suggestions you've already received: always read your dialogue aloud to yourself. If you can't deliver it in a way that sounds natural--as if a real live person were speaking the lines--chances are you're using the character as a mouthpiece, which is always something to avoid.