[ SECRET POST #3058 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Ughhhhh

[(Anonymous)]

Well OP did mention this:

"who just so happened to have curves in all the right places, a bunch of guys hitting on her all the time (but she turns them down, naturally), and she's super sweet and kind and blah blah blah. "

Which, I've gotta say, sounds like a relationship sue if ever I've heard one.

If the author went out of his way to write a realistic 22 year old woman then I don't think it would come across as creepy.

But it's such a blatant fantasy that it does.

The age gap isn't the only issue here.

Re: Ughhhhh

[(Anonymous)]

So the woman is attractive and guys hit on her. Like, okay, a bit stereotypical but not exactly shocking stuff here. And she's... nice. Well. Okay.

OP's post was entirely focused on the age gap, how appalling it wast that an adult 22-year-old and adult 50-year-old would be married. If OP wants to critique, she should've suggested then maybe breathing a bit more originality into the 22-year-old, and... I don't know, made her less hot?