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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-05-19 06:34 pm

[ SECRET POST #3058 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋

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Re: Ughhhhh

(Anonymous) 2015-05-20 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
That entire second paragraph could have been better summed up as "I don't believe the romance, it requires much more depth and an exploration of motivation so that the reader can understand why these two characters are in love with each other."

Creepy is a massive value judgement. Creepy (and even "discomforted") is your personal feelings on the age gap, it has absolutely nothing to do with the writing.