[ SECRET POST #3058 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Ughhhhh

[(Anonymous)]

"Alarm bells" and "creepy" are judgments on the writer, not on the work.

"Alarm bells" for what? That the writer is a creepy potential pedo living out his dirty old man fantasies via writing corny and cliched stories? That has no relevance to how the thing was written. You're not his psychologist and you're not the cops. Leave the judgement to them and do what you're supposed to do in a writing critique workshop.