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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-05-19 06:34 pm

[ SECRET POST #3058 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3058 ⌋

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Re: Ughhhhh

(Anonymous) 2015-05-20 07:36 am (UTC)(link)
the author writes the love interest poorly and thoughtlessly

... which could be because the author isn't a great writer and that's why he's taking a writing class - to learn how to write better.

Re: Ughhhhh

(Anonymous) 2015-05-20 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
... which could be why OP pointed out the area where they need improvement.

Re: Ughhhhh

(Anonymous) 2015-05-20 08:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Which they could do in a way without making personal value judgments about the subject of the story.