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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-05-23 03:41 pm

[ SECRET POST #3062 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3062 ⌋

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Re: This...

(Anonymous) 2015-05-23 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
DA

Oh god, "exposition delivered via quipping".

I want to strangle Whedon so bad for that. He's inspired several fanfic and non-fanfic writers to try *way* too hard at witty snappy banter, and when it fails it fails so obviously epically it's embarrassing.
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Re: This...

[personal profile] dethtoll 2015-05-23 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah his biggest problem is snark in place of character development and I hate it. It's not enough that he has to write everything like a comic book, but he writes everything like a 90s comic book because that's what he used to write.
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Re: This...

[personal profile] i_paint_the_sky 2015-05-24 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, this so much. I hated Coulson for most of season one of S.H.I.E.L.D. because his only reason for existing seemed to be to deliver Whedon one-liners (I haven't actually seen the Avengers, so I had no reason to come into the series loving the character like people who have seen the Avengers seem to do).

I think Buffy, Angel, and Firefly got it right, with characters who had great lines AND depth. But he hasn't quite managed it for me in anything more recent that he's done.