[ SECRET POST #3129 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3129 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Current Reading - Black Out/All Clear

[(Anonymous)]

The only time she kinda drops the ball is with Dunworthy going into the past too. I know she needed to introduce a new factor to keep the text moving forward at that point, because it could have stalled out there, but it just comes across as such a boneheaded move. He knows that the drops are getting screwed up, that is why he is rearranging all the dates himself at that point to try and compensate, and he knows his "deadline" is really soon. And he is supposed to be a stickler about going prepared. Yet we are supposed to believe he just charges through anyway? It just makes him come across as a dumbass. He doesn't even have much of a plot impact afterward his message of urgency is delivered, he is just stuck there to make sure the people back home don't figure things out too soon themselves.