[ SECRET POST #3129 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3129 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

Re: Transcript by OP

[(Anonymous)]

I'm curious to know whether your friend's sex scenes get much positive feedback. If not, then yeah, they're probably not very good by any measuring stick. But if other readers (more than just a couple) seem to find her sex scenes hot, then you may have to consider that everyone has their own taste in smut. Her style may not be to your liking but that doesn't necessarily mean it doesn't work for other people.

Admittedly, penises "diving into" vaginas does sound pretty bad to me. And purple prose can definitely be a problem. On the other hand, some people (*raises hand*) find lots of descriptive words (throbbing/aching/gripping/straining/leaking/swollen/burgeoning/etc) to be insanely hot. I also find vocalizations during sex scenes to be really hot (though I do tend to think all caps is best left off, we're in agreement on that at least). Basically, not everyone responds the same way to stuff, and not all sex scenes are trying to accomplish the same thing. Something that will seem stupid to one person is i'll-be-in-my-bunk material for someone else. And something that works in a tender lovemaking scene will be out of place in a rampant fucking scene. *shrugs*

This is not to say that you're not completely right about your friend's smut. Just that I'm hesitant to jump on board the smut criticism train, when personally I've read so many widely different smut styles that are just fine for what they are. Or that work for lots of other people and just not me. Or vice versa.