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Re: Share your work
(Anonymous) 2015-08-27 12:12 am (UTC)(link)Title: Tested
Summary: When counting his fingers fails, Stiles takes a more harmful approach to knowing what's real, and Stilinski and Melissa deal with the fallout. (Stiles is the catalyst for the story -- the first chapter is all his -- but it's more of a study on the sheriff and Melissa and their relationship with each other and Stiles and Scott.
Tags Self harm, Protective Parents, Friendship, season 3b, Stilinski Family Feels, mildly AU, Dementia, Suicidal Imagery.
Link: http://archiveofourown.org/works/4661340/chapters/10634820
Re: Share your work
As for your Warnings...personally, I'D be fine with "No Archive Warnings Apply." Violence is the only one that seems like you could make a case for, but your story is different from like big bloody battles. It's more violence against the self...which is different to me, and acknowledged in the tags. You might add a body horror tag, just for that one hallucination of Scott, though.
As for the story: It's a good little thing you've got going on here. My personal favorite is the Sheriff chapter. Everything from the moment he carries Stiles into the ER is just about perfect, and I really love the way you used Scott's healing power to help more than his physical pain. Ditto Scott's backpedaling when the Sheriff is mad at him. Kid may be an alpha, but Stilinski's a parent.
And the Melissa chapter was sweet, too. I like that you didn't quite pull the trigger on making it a ship. Like, I can see it going that way, but it's all wonderful subtext right now. There's not enough of that in Teen Wolf fic.
Re: Share your work
(Anonymous) 2015-08-27 02:46 am (UTC)(link)