[ SECRET POST #3209 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3209 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 03 pages, 054 secrets from Secret Submission Post #459.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

That makes sense (for original fiction, at least, fanfction maybe not so much since readers already know the characters). Epithets can be a way to work in some exposition without doing a whole paragraph of an info dump. "Her gaze wandered to the window while the blond man absent-mindedly trailed the flesh and blood fingers of his right hand over the artificial ones of his left." and so on.

[iambecomebees]

It's not about whether the reader knows who the character is or not, it's about whether the POV character does,