[ SECRET POST #3210 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3210 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[(Anonymous)]

The writers of a movie are, obviously, involved well before the animators are, and it so happens that the writers of Road To El Dorado have an extensive archive of their thoughts and experiences about writing. Here, from their site at: http://www.wordplayer.com/columns/wp40.Off-Screen.Movie.html

"In our original structure, our guys meet a native woman, Chel. She appears in the jungle pursued by warriors. Our heroes fight them off, and save this damsel in distress. But Chel is hardly grateful; she disappears. Tulio and Miguel get captured and led to the city, where they find themselves mistaken for Gods. Which seems okay until they're called upon to preside over a ceremony. A prisoner is brought forth... and it turns out to be the native woman, Chel. She's a thief, and is to be killed, dropped into a ceynote well, sacrificed in their honor.
Following the off-screen movie notion, this structure works. We're surprised to see Chel again, but quickly fill in what must have happened. The reason the warriors were chasing her in the beginning was because she stole something. Our guys actually saved a thief instead of an innocent woman. But she must have been caught at some point, and convicted of a crime, and sentenced to be sacrificed. And now our guys have to do something about it -- the poor girl is dangling there, held by guards, about to drop to her death.
In the film as revised, that's not now how the story goes. The powers-that-be changed it to --
Chel is still introduced as being chased. But instead of heading off-screen, she hangs around, going with our guys into the city. Our heroes get mistaken for gods, and dismiss her. When they find her again, she's waiting at their temple.
It's not a terrible change. But it is flat. And part of the reason it's flat is because the off-screen movie is empty. And by leaving the Chel character on screen with nothing to do, it helps to establish her as someone who does nothing. Oddly, in this case, character complexity is lost by giving her meaningless screen time. (Plus, in this structure, you lose a good surprise, and a story twist.)"

[solticisekf]

Interesting.