[ SECRET POST #405 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #405 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Last day to submit for next week!

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Comments

Re: 59

[(Anonymous)]

I'm sure there are other things you noticed that seemed to get too much detail to be dropped as quickly as they seemed to be--but this is a WIP.

Actually, like I said before, I noticed more stuff that doesn't get much detail at all but that's still in there. A lot of it seems pretty pointless and makes you wonder why it's even there in the first place, and I really doubt that all of it is foreshadowing.


We did talk about that a little. Yeah, he was tipsy driving back. Bad choice on his part, but.

Well, this is kinda bad. Edgeworth would never drink and drive. Especially not with Phoenix and Maya in the car.


I know it's bewildering to you to think that nobody seemed to "catch" these things that you're pointing out, and trust me, it's just as bewildering to me.

To go back to the grammar mistakes, here's some of the obvious stuff I was talking about:


"Are you too tired for a quick cup of coffee, or should I just drop you off at home?"

That sentence makes no sense whatsoever. It would make sense if it said "Are you awake enough". Otherwise, he's just repeating the same thing twice.


"If there something—"

"Oh, quite sulking, Nick; I was just kidding,"

See what I mean?


Edgeworth was also surprisingly straightforward taste in food.

And someone has to explain to me how you can read that sentence and not realize that it makes no sense.


There's a lot more, but you get the idea.

Re: 59

[musouka-manga.livejournal.com]

Well, this is kinda bad. Edgeworth would never drink and drive. Especially not with Phoenix and Maya in the car.

She was referring to driving home from the apartment. Edgeworth wasn't quite as drunk when he kissed Phoenix as you think he was, though it was my mistake for not making it clear he had more than one beer at the apartment. I apologize.

See what I mean?

Yes, indeed I do. Thank you.