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fandomsecrets2015-12-08 06:29 pm
case) wrote in fandomsecrets2015-12-08 06:29 pm
[ SECRET POST #3261 ]
⌈ Secret Post #3261 ⌋
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Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction
But seriously. I only find those descriptions pertinent when they're in-character or meant to imply that the character constantly staring at tits is like... a date rapist or a run of the mill horndog.
What bothers me is purple prose in published fiction. If you're using two or three adjectives for every single thing you describe, it's time to cut back.
Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction
(Anonymous) 2015-12-09 01:05 am (UTC)(link)Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction