[ SECRET POST #3261 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3261 ⌋

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Notes:

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Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

What you said. I've dropped series because I was tired of getting a sexiness report on every damn woman who appeared in text every time she showed up.

I also really hate 1st person books.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

When did he get better? I flipped through one of the later books a while ago, considering giving it a second chance, and there was a bunch of skeevy shit about his friend's daughter who he was training. She was underage.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

Ew. I hadn't heard that. Maybe I'll just stay out.

Crap, I'm not logged in. Sorry.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

Was about to say the same thing, though it took me a few books to twig that it was happening every time a female character showed up.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

Seriously. It got to the point where I was expecting him to write "she looked like a grandma, but with a great rack and these long, long legs and incredibly shapely thighs that any hotblooded man would need to think about"

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[ketita]

I hate 1st person too, but what I am absolutely allergic to is 2nd person. The only thought in my head reading 2nd person is NO FUCK YOU I DO NOT FEEL THAT WAY I DO NOT THINK THAT FUCK YOU.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

Reading second person is some kind of torture.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com]

2nd person may do okay if I know it's one character talking to another character, but I just hate the idea of a character talking to the reader.

Re: Things you hate to see in published fiction

[(Anonymous)]

I really hate second person in REVIEWS. That, to me, is even worse than reading it in fiction.