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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2015-12-26 03:47 pm

[ SECRET POST #3279 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3279 ⌋

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OP

(Anonymous) 2015-12-27 01:09 am (UTC)(link)
The problem is that this feminist agenda didn't move the plot. It was used only to establish that the main hero is good and to show readers that that's the decent way to act as if anyone doubts it.
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Re: OP

[personal profile] kaffy_r 2015-12-27 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
I don't think that's a bad thing. There are untold numbers of stories where events take place in behind the plot. Sometimes, they simply add to the depth, the richness of the world that's been created in which the main story goes forward. And in this case, showing what the main character does, rather than have him declaim about it, makes the world that much more three-dimensional.

Also, when you stop to think about it, the actions he took with his aunts are less an issue of message agenda than proof of his character - much as his ultimate decision to deal with his uncle with fairness rather than revenge is, or his decision to visit the funeral of the ship's crew.