[ SECRET POST #3279 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3279 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

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[(Anonymous)]

Contradicting something they wrote a couple of chapters earlier. I get that it's easy to do when writing a WIP, but if I'm reading a completed story, Author, please go back and change that (not including intended unreliable narrator).

When everybody is sooooo mean to the Author's favorite character (woobie). I can stand it up to a point, but, man, when most of the other prominent (and canonically honorable/right/good) characters are suddenly evil caricatures of themselves, well, I just can't.

Gratuitous and excessive crying for no apparent reason from a character who very seldom or never cries. I don't mind crying and I think some characters could use a good cry, but it should make sense character-wise and shouldn't be at every little thing, unless there's an underlying reason (grief, hormone-imbalance, etc.).

The dreaded homophones, of course. Beyond to/too/two, their/there/they're, your/you're, and its/it's, there are also waiving/waving, discrete/discreet, apart/a part, lead/led, undo/undue.