[ SECRET POST #3338 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3338 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Poetry thread

[(Anonymous)]

*scours my "stuff I write" archives*...

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more searing, rife to burn my skin.
Each morn, my body cries out with dismay,
And every nightly war, mosquitoes win.
My eyes the sun does scorch with every beam,
And adds to all the pain that summer brings;
Through sun-glass, I still suffer from the gleam
Found still, but less, in winters, falls, and springs.
And freedom from the rough restraints of school?
My parents grant me none of it, alas.
I’ve not a breath to idle; I must work,
Or else I am compelled to take a class.
Yes, though a summer’s day you might recall,
That isn’t such a compliment at all.

Yes, the rhyme scheme lapses slightly. School does not rhyme with work. I'm sorry. :(

Re: Poetry thread

[(Anonymous)]

I’ve not a breath to idle; I must work,
Or else I am compelled to take a class.

You might alter the second line to

Or compelled to take a class I cannot shirk.

It's 11 syllables but I think it would do.