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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-03-22 07:10 pm

[ SECRET POST #3366 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3366 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Re: The Middle (Sue's anticipating her first time)

(Anonymous) 2016-03-23 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know this fandom at all (is it the TV show with the guy who was the Janitor in Scrubs?), but this fic segment is outstanding! Nice job! I want to say "nice imagery," but I'm not sure that's the literary term I'm looking for, but regardless, I'm liking the word choices and sentence structures.

Re: The Middle (Sue's anticipating her first time)

(Anonymous) 2016-03-23 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
That's the show! I'm having a lot of fun with this fic and the nervousness that can come with young love and first times. Really going for a realistic awkwardness and a sexual relationship that takes a second try and communication to get right.

Re: The Middle (Sue's anticipating her first time)

(Anonymous) 2016-03-23 09:17 am (UTC)(link)
NAYRT

Is this going to be a story that's ultimately sweet? Because I love Sue and want her to be more grownup without losing her adorkable side. Very interested in this idea.

Re: The Middle (Sue's anticipating her first time)

(Anonymous) 2016-03-23 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
It's definitely going to end sweetly, and there'll be some bonus Axel and Sue bro-sis bonding in the middle.