[ SECRET POST #3371 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3371 ⌋

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Comments

Re: How do I NOT Write a Mary-Sue?

[a_potato]

Why would a writer be motivated to change if the critiques left are vague?

Re: How do I NOT Write a Mary-Sue?

[(Anonymous)]

Okay, you aren't concerned about hearing why what you are doing is wrong, I'm walking away now.

Re: How do I NOT Write a Mary-Sue?

[a_potato]

The opposite, actually. I am concerned with hearing why what I'm doing is wrong, so I want something more than, "I don't like this/this is wrong/your OC is a Mary Sue." Why don't you like it? Why is it wrong? Why is my OC a Mary Sue? A detailed critique provides a jumping off point; a vague critique gives me little to go on.