[ SECRET POST #3395 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3395 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Writing questions!

[(Anonymous)]

Might be kinda late to get any responses, but I need a reason for my antagonist to have attacked his mentor, and then run off.

(I'm also not sure where he's been before he enters the story at the climax.)

Re: Writing questions!

[(Anonymous)]

He thought the mentor had done something wrong.

The mentor HAD done somthing wrong.

He was possessed.

He had taken the bad drugs.

As for where he's been, if there are authorities in the world, he might have been hiding from them?

Re: Writing questions!

[(Anonymous)]

I'm sorry, but without knowing more about the characters in question and the context, it's hard to make suggestions that are guaranteed to make sense in your story. You know these characters, presumably. You know how likely or unlikely it is for the protagonist to attack a person, and his mentor specifically. What do YOU think would motivate him to do such a thing?

Re: Writing questions!

[(Anonymous)]

Maybe he needed to keep his mentor from finding out something questionable about himself? ( As for what would be questionable, a detailed analysis of the mentor's prejudices and personality might be in order to figure that out properly. )