[ SECRET POST #3452 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3452 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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[Courage, the Cowardly Dog]



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03.
[Vampire Princess Miyu]


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04.
[Powerpuff Girls]


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05.
[The Mummy and The Mummy Returns, Evelyn/Imhotep]


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06.
[Orphan Black]


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07.
[Lost in Translation]


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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 10 secrets from Secret Submission Post #493.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ], [ 1 - posted twice ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Wow. Lots of purple prose and awkward word choices:

His movement's suddenly turned sharp, sensations torn between sensual and abusive. His hands snatched her wandering tips from his skin, pinning them above her head. His grip was tight, the weight of his body crashing down against her. Her gaze was shaky as a cry released from her lips. He crashed their hips together with load clap, skin marring skin. It was almost painful, how deep he was reaching inside of her.

"Wandering tips" referring to fingertips, lol, though two sentences later it's "She forced back a scream when his lips met her breast, his lips colder than ice. His teeth grazed hard tip, golden eyes staring back at her in hidden victory" where "hard tip" = nipples, I'm guessing.

Does anyone over age 13 describe fucking as "he crashed their hips together"? Seriously, I'm dying here. I'll even overlook the "load clap", though that must be one hell of a pelvic thrust if his skin manages to mar hers, while at the same time his penis (one assumes) is "reaching inside of her". Yikes, do ancient mummies have prehensile dongs? How terrifying.


Skip it unless you're desperate, OP.

[(Anonymous)]

above anon:
it was the first fic I could find ::sheepish::

[(Anonymous)]

Well, I think that's hot. I wish more fics would you that kind of prose without getting lost in it.

[(Anonymous)]

"His hands snatched her wandering tips from his skin, pinning them above her head."

I'm sad now, that I know it was meant to be fingertips. I was imagining very long pointy mammaries enveloping her face.