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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2016-09-24 03:58 pm

[ SECRET POST #3552 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3552 ⌋

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Re: Inspired by #3

[identity profile] mimi-sardinia.livejournal.com 2016-09-25 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
I read the beta notes of a friend's fanfic and one of the bits of advice was to salt in little mentions of a characetr's looks in the course of actions, for example:

"-he explained as he brushed aside a lock of dark hair." - That line at least gets across that the character has dark hair, without flooding the text with a massive description.