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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2017-03-12 03:52 pm

[ SECRET POST #3721 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3721 ⌋

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Re: Dear Fanfic Author....

[personal profile] dancingmouse 2017-03-12 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
"Look, you ask for concrit and I, along with others I've noticed, deliver. Why does it seem like you never listen? You keep making the same damn mistakes over and over again, and it's getting really tedious. If you're not going to listen when someone's trying to help you, stop begging for concrit in your Author's Notes."

"You, I have a few words to say to you about how you wrote Character A. They would NEVER act like that. N.E.V.E.R! Especially not towards Character B. I don't know what version of Character A you've been looking at, but yeah, you FAILED."
Edited 2017-03-12 21:26 (UTC)