[ SECRET POST #3833 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3833 ⌋

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Comments

Re: Book club - Joust discussion

[(Anonymous)]

I would have read it as no-pedo if it happened once. But I think something like four times? It got a little annoying. She could have said it once and then just used familial terms to describe their interactions instead of flat out having character state over and over that Ari liked whores and was like a bull with them, and never even looked at pretty boys.

(Also sadly, if I remember right, every single female character in the other books are LIs)

Re: Book club - Joust discussion

[diet_poison]

I thought they only talked about the whore thing once? :/ idk.

Also dang, that really sucks. Female authors in particular I want to hold to a higher standard wrt writing actual female characters...granted, I understand wanting to be accurate to the time period and avoid certain tropes, but it doesn't have to be a warrior...why not write someone who's just a friend, or a lady, or a merchant, or hell even a prostitute who plays a part in the story somehow.