[ SECRET POST #3846 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #3846 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

Re: Fanfic Gripes/Likes

[(Anonymous)]

OP Of course there is. That advice post says to use extremely obtrusive alternatives, though, rather than making who's speaking and in what manner they're saying it obvious through in-character dialogue and context.

Imagine if every new line had a brand new dialogue tag and nearly all of them were pointless:

"Hi," Adam said.
"Yo," Eve whispered.
"Eating apples is wrong," Adam opined.
"Gonna eat the shit out of this apple anyway," Eve uttered.
"Oooh, God isn't gonna like that," Adam asserted.

See? Terrible. But that's what the post I was thinking of was advising.