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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2017-07-22 04:04 pm

[ SECRET POST #3853 ]


⌈ Secret Post #3853 ⌋

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(Anonymous) 2017-07-22 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Sure, if you are a shit writer it may make the story harder to understand. But then, if you are a shit writer you got other problems.

(Anonymous) 2017-07-23 04:07 am (UTC)(link)
+1. It's the skill of the writer that's the problem in that instance.

(Anonymous) 2017-07-23 07:16 am (UTC)(link)
the problems are in the words and sentence structure. a good writer can accomodate those problems, but the issues are present even if you write around them. having referential language increases cognitive load.