[ SECRET POST #542 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #542 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 11 pages, 265 secrets from Secret Submission Post #078.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 1 - broken links ], [ 1 2 - not!secrets ], [ 1 - not!fandom ], [ 1 2 - too big ], [ 1 2 - repeat ], [ 1 - posted twice ], [ 1 2 - personal attack ].
Current Secret Submissions Post: here.
Suggestions, comments, and concerns should go here.

Comments

[velvet-mace.livejournal.com]

123) *Feels guilty* I've been crappy lately at reading any fic.

133) Good long fic spreads the porny bits through the whole thing or waits until the climax for it (hee hee climax). I have that problem, too when it turns out that the long fic is actually a short stand alone porn story followed by a sequel which is radically different in tone. Like the rape fic which metamorphs in the second chapter into a 7 chapter "healing romance arc." Even though the events follow, the pacing of the long fic is crap with that set up. (Much better would do hint at the rape, and provide breif flashbacks to it, with the most dramatic part coming out in time with the climax of the healing... but I digress).