[ SECRET POST #4025 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4025 ⌋

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[(Anonymous)]

Try watching different crime shows that focus on one detective? Like Homicide Hunter or I Am Homicide or "Coroner, I Speak for the Dead." And listen to the way they talk. The way they use slang or their facial expressions that help convey tone. Kenda is very uh, Spock meets George Takei, very dry, very technical but also very funny. McFadden is very breezy, very smiley, outgoing, we're having a Sunday dinner african american male chat. Where as Hetrick is very much a North Eastern college educated white guy that dabbles in bhuddism?

Or pick up a Jacques book and see how he write dialect of different British cultures? The hares and the moles are two very good examples. (I don't honestly recommend writing dialogue the way Jacques does because it gets on a lot of people's nerves. I'm used to it. So, I enjoy it.)

Whedon is a good foundation! But you can build on it!

Now that you've been flooded in advice. :)