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fandomsecrets2018-01-10 06:57 pm
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[ SECRET POST #4025 ]
⌈ Secret Post #4025 ⌋
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(Anonymous) 2018-01-11 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)Came here to say this.
It sounds like you learned to write from TV script dialogue, which is 100% different from writing dialogue for, say, fic or a legit novel. Read more books, avoid mimicking TV and movies, and you should be fine.