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Case ([personal profile] case) wrote in [community profile] fandomsecrets2018-03-21 06:07 pm

[ SECRET POST #4095 ]


⌈ Secret Post #4095 ⌋

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Let's see.

(Anonymous) 2018-03-21 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
You could do very distracted, moving from one thing to the next and then back again. Short, choppy thoughts can help convey that.

You can do obsessive thoughts, whatever he's trying to do, he keeps coming back to something.

You can do a sort of spiraling stream-of-consciousness and it can be a bit of both, it can start out sort of coherent, but get less so as it goes on.

Re: Let's see.

(Anonymous) 2018-03-21 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Agreed. A lot of different thoughts interjectng could be done by way of hyphens or parentheticals, italics or new short grafs.

Re: Let's see.

(Anonymous) 2018-03-22 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
Good ideas, but I can see this getting real old, real quick if there's a lot from this character's POV.