[ SECRET POST #4095 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4095 ⌋

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Re: Writing thread - mixed genre-ish

[(Anonymous)]

To flesh it out a little, you could try to loop back to May and Coulson through a conflict and resolution. Yo-Yo and Coulson's interaction and Coulson's personal experience of both situations can still have an equal balance, but it might feel more finished and cohesive that way?

For example:

Coulson and May reunite, it's intense/happy/whatever but there are some things Coulson is avoiding talking or thinking about, and it causes him to distance himself.

He talks with Yo-Yo and through the course of their interaction he comes to a better understanding or acceptance within himself and maybe the other character relates something personal that Coulson can then apply to his own life and relationships.

May and Coulson reunite again with less urgency, but more emotional intimacy.

Re: Writing thread - mixed genre-ish

[(Anonymous)]

It's kind of set up so that May is the catalyst for Coulson realizing he never *really* came to terms with losing a limb, which then sends him to Yo-Yo whose loss is still fresh. I was planning to have her be really insecure and angry about how helpless and dependent on other people she feels. By it's nature, that has to touch on the Mack/Yo-Yo relationship. I guess that would be a good time to loop May back into the conversation...