[ SECRET POST #4123 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4123 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Notes:

Secrets Left to Post: 01 pages, 17 secrets from Secret Submission Post #590.
Secrets Not Posted: [ 0 - broken links ], [ 0 - not!secrets ], [ 0 - not!fandom ], [ 0 - too big ], [ 0 - repeat ].
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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

My point is all of that is inferred rather than actually included in the plot. The structure of the sisterly-love plot, despite being the focus, is objectively weak from a storytelling perspective. There were several ways it could have been focused better to actually show mutual understanding being achieved, which didn't happen.

Again, whether they loved each other was never in question. Whether they understood each other was the main conflict (see: their argument in the castle) but wasn't resolved, just brushed under the love thing, which, again, we already knew. There was no growth, just more proof that we already had from their character introductions.

I wasn't saying those two were more "progressive", just referring to those (since they were in the secret) as sibling relationships with a clear plot/goal, even as a subplot.