[ SECRET POST #4380 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4380 ⌋

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[(Anonymous)]

These are definitely the ways I like to see these moments used, and I agree they can add so much to character nuances. Even the character waiting on the person in the bathroom has time to reflect. Realistically sometimes scenes and moments get broken up like this, and that moment to breathe, whether desired by the characters or not, (ever been in an argument when someone steps out for a moment and then the heat of the moment is broken and the tension dies a little?) Make it realistic to me. I've thought one too many times during extended scenes that it feels really unrealistic that a character can do something nonstop (a long journey, conversation, maybe sex and then whatever happens after) without needing that momentary break, and while I don't need detail on it, the effect that pause has on the flow of whatever dynamic is happening is not something I can realistically ignore. There are all kinds of tiny shifts it can add under the right (subtly and sparingly used) circumstances.