[ SECRET POST #4559 ]

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⌈ Secret Post #4559 ⌋

Warning: Some secrets are NOT worksafe and may contain SPOILERS.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

It's so fucking bad though

[(Anonymous)]

It really, truly is

And I've read enough of it to tell "terrible female POV with totally wrong biology" is one of the predominant trends

WAY more than any story that focuses on the male character existing or having emotions

[(Anonymous)]

SO much of it is just written-down porno. There's no feeling, no intimacy, no emotion, no real sense of narrative, no immediacy or meaningful lust. It's awful.

[(Anonymous)]

That isn't necessarily bad, it's not like women can't enjoy that type of thing too

It's bad because it's just terribly written, and also dear god many female body parts don't work the way they think they do

[(Anonymous)]

It's not intrinsically bad but it is fundamentally limited and that makes it all the more annoying that it's so common and so poorly executed

[(Anonymous)]

Yeah, I don't disagree with any of that lol

[(Anonymous)]

Seconding this, for sure.

[philstar22]

Yup. I for one like porn and some porn tropes and in theory like that type of thing. but they are generally so badly written and have no understanding of female anatomy that I can't enjoy.

[jadeile]

Yeah, you know the story is written by a dude when:
-the cervix is penetrated, and it's said to feel good, too
-"he shot his potent seed into her unprotected womb"
-virgin hole
-they can hear the hymen tear
-"he filled her womb up and kept her plugged until he was certain she was pregnant"

I'm sorry for you eyes and brain : | I hurt mine, too, just writing that. Worse when I had the misfortune of reading those; it's like a train wreck and you can't stop reading once you've begun.

[type_wild]

Good lord, that cervix thing. HOW EVEN.

[(Anonymous)]

Yeeesh, there's nothing sexy about the cervix.